一、根据题意打草稿。
Qingdao is to the east of Shandong Province and west of the Pacific Ocean. At first it is a small fishing village and the most of the villagers went fishing. Because of the reform and opening, Qingdao developed very quickly and very soon became developed cities. Tourism is the main source of its economy and every year thousands of tourist all over the country or all over the world come to here to visit. It is known to us, Qingdao is also one of the place which Olympic Games of 2008 will be hold.
二、修改：由于各种原因，尚有许多不如意的地方，需要修改。
Qingdao is in the east of Shandong Province and to the west of the Pacific Ocean. At first it was a small fishing village and most of the villagers went fishing. Because of policy of the reform and opening, Qingdao developed very quickly and very soon became one of the developed cities. Tourism is the main source of its economy and every year thousands of tourists from all over the country and even from all over the world come here to visit. As is known to us, Qingdao is also one of the places where Olympic Games of 2008 will be held. |
